A rainstorm （添削後）

I woke up in the middle of the night due to the a roaring sound. It was pouring with rain outside, and I heard a clap of thunder as well. We've faced the an unprecedented disaster in our city since yesterday. A The warning of heavy rain hasn't been canceled yet, and we're still searching for the survivors in the stricken areas. My husband has been working in a search party since this early morning. I really wish this nasty rain would let up! An estimated number of 14 people were killed by the landslides and over 11 people are still missing...


...いやあ、ことごとく冠詞で訂正が入ってしまいました。
まだまだ修行が必要です。